Knowing Margarita Jimenez
Let us start with some dreams that I had in the past. As a kid I wanted to become a secretary. I used to fold the edge of a sheet of paper and then tap on it as if it were a writing machine and I enjoyed listening to the sound coming out of it. As I got older I became involved in the world of the English language while in Secondary school. I then started dreaming of going into a country where English was spoken and I wanted to be able to have a conversation with a native speaker. As a grown-up, I started dreaming of getting into the university and being able to say one day: “I have a bachelor’s degree”.
How many of those things did actually come true? Well, I did turn into a secretary, a bilingual one, and that gave me the opportunity to get my fist job. I started teaching typing and shorthand. After four years of teaching the opportunity to go to the United States presented and I took it. That meant the fulfillment of my long wanted dream and that was a clear and determining turning point in my life. Already back in Mexico, my interest to get into the university came back and I decided to try to get into it. It was not an easy task but I was so proud of myself when I found out that I was accepted. All these achievements have marked my personality and have given me another vision of life.
What dreams do I have for my future now? Apart from knowing that it is uncertain, there are some things I still hope to happen. I would like to finish my studies and work in another country. I want to have my own house, a two story house with a big front and back garden, and many rooms where I can have my space to practice my hobbies like handcrafting and sewing. I would also like to contribute in developing a device that could help in having less painful mammographies and more accurate results for other diseases. I know that many of these things sound unrealistic, but I guess that is why they are called dreams.
As you can see, I have had the opportunity to achieve many of my dreams and life has given me the chance to keep aiming for more. I do not know if this gives you a better idea of who and how I am but one thing is for sure, I am a dreamer and I hope I will always be, because for me to have dreams is synonym of having hope and that is essential for me in life.
Hi Margarita!I consider that your essay is very good! it is interesting, also it has coherence and you can get the readers attention. In each paragraph you support the main idea with the appropiated supporing ideas! Besides, you follow in the body paragraphs the order that you mention thesis statement! but just i want to say you that in the second body paragraph you wrote the word "that" sometimes and it sounds repetitive!
ResponderEliminarIn conclusion, I think that you did an excellent work!!:)
Hi! I saw that your essay is interesting because I got attention since the introduction; moreover I agree with marce, you followed all aspects in the body paragraphs. This is a great essay.
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